Voted For: ~DESTINY~
DESTINY i know im in a battle with you as we speak but i do think u got this one better structure not by a lot but it was better and you had harder punches flow was great and vocab was easy to read sorry illmatico keep workin on you punches and srtucture and lay out more neatly
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