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Old 10-23-04, 04:26 PM   #1
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THEME:SITTING BY THA WATER FISHING BY THE TREE ,MY GIRLFRIEND SETTIN UP AN PIC-NIC,,,,,MY SON IS ALMOST COMING HOME FROM SCHOOL
I GOT AN RING IN MY POCKET (PROPSOIN) DEN THA CLOUDS TURNS BLACK INSTANTLY AS I LOOK UP I SEE A LIGHT COMING RIGHT AT ME~!










kabooms~! strike by lighting my whole body turns to a stone phase
as my girl stares she sees the horrified shock on my face
the lightning keeping my foot from touching da ground like unlaw grava-ty
my girl yelling and looking caresly knowing she cant help me
the lighting got my voice scratch i cant even yell "lord help me"
feels like my organs being evaporated,torn apart in pieces cant touch my girl all i can do is scream in pain
not here,not today i'd just went fishing me and my girl gettin married next month i cant be send to my grave
i feel like my eyes are in tha back of my head i cant see image like a un-connected tv plasma
why iam i holding my breathe da lightning got my lungs grasp by his hands am havin an asma (attack)
This lightning is like an venemouz snake its electric venemom spreading in my body quickly tryin to find tha death core~!
i feel my heart is weaking,i feel like da lightning is a rhino from james tha giant peach hit me through da core
i wish i was immortal like evvansescene but no,i cant cause i got dis lightning messing up my present (remember tha ring)
death can not be no acception i pledge for eva breathin i will fight dis lightning and make my present (come true)
den i felt my chest my heart was thumping my girl sitting right by me havin tears autum on her cheek (autum=fallin )
as i lay on tha grass by tha water creek sayin to my self "thank u god u saved me" hoping anotha lightning wont turn me to an stone phase (again)

errrrrr idk i was just writin feeback plz
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