Voted For: Poetikal Panda

Vision's Of Serenity & Hope Flutter Softly Away
Light getting More Luminous..Shook ill never see the Light of Day
The Dude Vowed he Would Pay me..Pay me back for My Sin's
Living a Thug's Life Didn't Know which Episode to Begin
Struggling to Grasp the Last Breath that Attempted To Evade
Did'nt see the Bullet's that Originated from the Crip's Escalade
My throat Dryed up like Water Drop's In the Desert Of Sahara
^^^^^^^^^^^ BEAUTIFUL IMAGINARY GOOD DEEP STUFF HERE MAYNE NICE SHIT


Life & Soul Rapidly Fading Away-Dayum My son Will never Know His Father....
Aight that Shit was Just off the top of Dome...Definely Not my Best shit....G'Luck......
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE CLOSA MAYNE GOOD PIECE HERE

POETIKAL-U HAD AN BEAUTIFUL IMAGINARY I LIKE YA FLOW GOOD WORD-CHOOSIN



death is certain, it's justified by life
alive or dead still surpassed by strif
your here today your gone the next
lose of words dyin the ultimate test
cold an stiff your lifeless body rests
u afraid to lose the little u have left
ur legacy forever in peoples memory
if there is a god i beg you for mercy
exhault thee, hold your name high
but question why do people die.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ THIS IS NOT AN GOOD VERSE ELEVATE USIN MORE IMAGINARY,CREATIVE,AND WORD'S VOCAB

VIVID-U NEED TO ELEVATE THAT WASNT AN GOOD VERSE STR8 LACKED,,,,,,,DIDNT RHYMED PLUS HE DIDNT MADE SENSE
U NEED TO ELEVATE ON USIN WORDS-VOCAB-IMAGINARY-AND CREATIVE-LIKE PAINTIN AN PICURE,,,,,,,THA VERSE WASNT GOOD LACKED

V-POET CAUSE HE HAD BETTA IMAGINARY,CREATIVE,GOOD WORDS,VOCAB IN HIS VERSE

VIVID-ELEVATE ON EVERYTHING ON TOPICALS

~PEACE~ POET RETURN AN FAV IN MY OPEN MIC

THE LIGHTNING DA LINK ITS IN MY SIG MAYNE

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