Voted For: Poetikal Panda

poetikal panda:

are you a alias.....because i'm a panda too woot woot!
nice emotional depth in there...........................
story went nice and your vocabulary was good aswell...

vivid:

i really think you should of made the lines longer
so it could become more understandable and better story
but other then that pretty good emotion and depth
was there and everything nice battle

but i have to choose.....ummmm poetikal panda

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