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Old 10-23-04, 06:00 PM   #13
BkBrawla
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Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN

Supervillan man your killin me, It's not my fault you run around with a table cloth and your mamma's red panty's, Im steppin to the plate, So please don't hesitate, You wanna say your sorry but it's way too fuckin late, So you can sell those wolftickets to someone that want's to buy, but if you wanna come and get some then I wanna see you try, With a crew like Crhyme Sindicate, you could suck the chrome off a bumper cause I can tell you ain't no ordinary Bitch, Tryin to spit some shit, When you used to swallow, and tell your friends Ru Paul was your favorite role model, I came to this site to perfect my skills, while your ass is at home clickin your fuckin high heels, I think you watched 8 mile just one too many times, then found the site online and now you think that you can rhyme, Well let me get off your back just like the last man did, so you can grab your Dictionary and spit some complicated shit. X-Felon
^^^^^^^^^^^^ DA VERSE WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOO NOT STRUTURE NO FLOW~! I READ IT ANYWAY BUT U DIDNT HAD NO PUNCHES,NO PERSONALS,SOME WORDPLAYS,BUT DA PUNCHES DIDNT CONNECT ELEVATE USIN STRUTURE




^^^player please...im tryna print this out on paper to read
fuck! i did that, it wont work...im not fluent in haterese
pal your foul...like a ball on 'that' side of the base-line
u couldnt even see me with your queer eye for the str8 guy
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ WORD NICE PUNCH GOOD FLOW




if lyrics were scratch and sniff, yours smell like ass and piss
if gay sex were accidents, u couldnt wait to crash in dicks
dont lie! this guy was arrested for pushin' crack dimes...
not the sacked kind, but the 1 in his pants on the backside
charismatical magic...this pimpness has total control of me
ur goin out wit my sister...and mister, SHE'S even all over me
when i spray in 15's dude, its only so my slugs can mingle
they kno u inside out, i blaze, u just burn like da usher single
^^^^^^^^^^^ "OK" GOOD WORDPLAYS,GOOD PUNCHES DECENT ONES TOO GOOD FLOW



im more lethal then death when i hit you with lead...
i'll put away this teck and just use my pencil instead
if hip hop were sinking and you were the only lifeboat around
ride wit u or go down? r.v. and i voted...we chose 2 drown
convicted twice 4 wack flows, theres no need 4 a 3rd strike
da wardens rite its hopeless, u shoulda learned the 1st time
im sick, determined 2 giv ur pc hiv and fleets of diseases kid
cuz ur shits all washed up, like lacey peta-sons baby fetus did
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE~! GOOD PUNCHES GOOD CLOSA AND NICE FLOW'

SUPERVILLIAN-DIS WASNT AN MERKIN DIS WAS AN STOMPING TO REMEMBER,NICE PUNCHES DECENT ONES,GOOD FLOW AND WORDPLAYS,THA PUNCHES JUST THREW DOWN AND CONNECTED NICE PUNCHES

X-FELON-U DIDNT HAD AN GOOD VERSE NO STRUTURE NO FLOW NO PUNCHES (ALTHOUGH I DID READ IT) PUNCHES DIDNT CONNECT CAUSE OF DA FLOW,AND U NEED TO ELEVATE ON DA FLOW AND USE HARDER PUNCHES

~PEACE~
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