nice shit here.. ..vocab, flow, and content was very good.. ..

"Horizontal Buildings Engineered By 3rd Class Breadwinners..
Outside I View A Picketing Cycle Lead By A Single Sinner..
All Tha Followers Jumping On That Singled Out Band Wagon..
Fighting To Rid Tha Devil From Products Of Tha Mans Lagging..
Catching An Echo In That Compact Space Of My Own Memory.."

^^ nice opener, started good and stayed on point through tha whole verse

"Burried Like Monetaries, Lapsed When Concealing Tha Chest..
Birds Eye View Is Subversive, Im No Feather Im Only A Crest..
Adolescence Show Interest In Everything Untill They Exit..
A Few Are Dislexic, While 50 Percent Are On Top Of Deaths Lips..
Or Forget To Mention Watching A Loved One Die This Day.."

^^ one of my favorite parts and good display of talent.. ..good shit here

"Im Tha Weeds In Tha Garden Of Edan Feeling Tha Mowers Blade..
Tha Environmentalist Wit A House Isolated In An Empty Glade..
I Have No Motivational Drive In This Traffic Of Urbanisation..
Lost In 2 Faces Of A Female Whos Feelings For Me Are Wasteness..
Tha Flavour Of Life Is Tastless, Message Is Tongue Twisting..
A New Soul And Maybe A Essence Is Wit Tha Shopping Listed.."

^^ my other fav. part from this.. ..nice endin for this as well, solid verse from beginnin to end.. ..keep it up


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