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Old 10-23-04, 06:28 PM   #7
Adam
 
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Voted For: Rapper ROD

hmmm not many good things can be said about this battle...both of you gotta elevate...and your structures weird...

breakdown...

Rapper ROD
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I don't hate you i jsut hate what you do,
trying to drop your verses like you drop food,
you pick it up and eat it, knowing its not that good
...not really that hard of a punch...but it was...5/10

spitting deaf verses and riding a dead rhyme.
its my time to shine on this little line,
maybe do a similie, then waste my time
....good multis...weird style of punch...6/10

i may not be the cream of the crop,
but im the missionary of this battle
and i, for surely, am gonna be on top.
...haha i like this closer...haha good stuff...8/10

Overal: 19/30
Pretty weak...really got to elevate...you can rhyme but your structure is kinda weird...it flowed allright, and you had a good punch or two in there....

poison
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yo rod ur probably cracked out or Drunk//
ur rhymes stink worst than a skunk//
...horrible vocab, plus it would be worse...not worst...weak...2/10

battling me is like trying to swim but u sunk//
keep runnin ur trap and get found dead in a trunk//
...i really don't understand your second line man....just another weak punch...3/10

if this was a ball game i'll give u a slam dunk//
dont try to rap cuz ur just a damn punk//
....HORRIBLE....JUST HORRIBLE PUNCH....1/10

front some more and i'll make u DROP like RAIN//
u'll be takin drugs just to STOP the PAIN
...good first line...then you threw away anything good possible...3/10

Overal: 9/40
This was quite possibly the worst verse i have ever read...i think you were the one on drugs when you wrote it...elevate a lot...punches were weak...just elevate everything aight...

v/Rapper ROD