Voted For: THUGLIFEOUTLAW

aight i was feeling both your verses, i felt dopeman could have come harder, lines i liked from dope were.

'you fool, put down the mouse an unplug ya keyboard..
like ''carmen san diego'' ya whole worlds bein played an explored'
nice and smooth
set a lyrical mine an you just been verbally boobie trapped..
this battles ''signed n sealed'' an you just been gift wrapped
not bad kinda generic but not bad at all
you had a better flow in this battle.
untouchable didnt have the witty punches but some raw personals.
I'm about to king these mothafucker, like he was a game of checkers,
newb basher, cuz he's all up on my challenge once he seen my 1-3 record
I'm not a big fan of alias's either, cuz ya ask me they all suck,
and if ya look in the link below, even he admits his names gay as fuck
I'm untouchable, theres really nothing you can do to this,
You be biting ideas off of niggas, just like ya did to Ludacris

shit was serious i always dig personals because in real life thats the shit that wins battles, flow was dopeman sounded better but i'd give this battle to
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