Okay If Ya'll not sure Here's another Short Piece It's Called "Demonic Lair" Hit Me back with What Ya'll Think Thank's.......
Trippin' On The Brink Of a Hellish Existence-
The Scorching Heat Proceeded With Agonising Persistence-
Scolding My train of Thought Grinding To a Halt-
Trapped, I was Imprisoned Amongst Lost Soul's Like a Bank Vault-
Figure's Below Me Trudging,Occasionally Glancing at Their Tormentor's-
Mindless Drone's Corrupted By Fiendish-Wrong Doing Dementor's-
Their Heart's Had been Torn From Their Possesion and Thrown Into a Furnace-
Stony-Emotionless Feeling's Stained Their Expression's One man's face was Sterness-
He was In the Prime Of his Youth-What had He done To End Up here?-
Prolly a Young Thug-Jackin' Car's Thiefing Introducing Drug's and Beer-
The Main Priority was How Do I Evade This Twisted Nightmare?-
My Eye's Flashed it was just a Vision Of My Afterlife-But I'll Live My Life Knowing Ima End Up Eventually In the Demon's Lair-

Aight here's two link's to my Battles with Tstorm & Dopeman
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=157068
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=157054