I Think It Was Decent. It Kinda Lost My Interest Tho, Because There Was Nothing That Really Caught My Attention. You Had Good Word Play, And Pretty Good Vocab, But I Didnt Really Feel Any Depth To The Poem. You Had Good Visuals, But No Real Story Line, Or Any Shit Like That. It Was Decent Tho. Work On What You Write And Try To Make It More Deep Thro The Way Your Word Things, Try To Set A Mood For The Poem, Like Sorrow, Anger, Happiness, Ect.
Decent Work Tho
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