long ass shit but it was alrite, you need alot of work tho like your content(get rid of that gangsta flow) your structure, your multis, you need to check out the forum for help on shit like this, but this had a flow to it depends on reading speed lol. rating it a 3/5 keep dropping and try n elevate peace out

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