dream of pyramids that peirce through the sky/
splite open the universe witness galaxies collide/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE FLOW RIGHT THERE WORDS TOO BASIC THOUGH ELEVATE USING VOCAB








watch continents crumble and get swollowed by the seas/
stars erupt like volcano's, the earth bleeds/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ YA LINES A LIL STRETCH ITS MESSING UP DA FLOW U NEED TO GET MORE CREATIVE WITH THIS PIECE GET MORE IMAGINARY,,,,,,WORK ON VOCAB TOO












atch the clouds splite apart and the sun melt whats left/
the ocean boils with tempatures that leaves the god of the seas impressed/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ERM AGAIN TOO STRETCH LENGTH YA LINES MAKE IT SHORT

GET BETTA WITH VOCAB MAYNE

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