CHRYMESINDICATE
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IP:
Voted For: Livin Legend
u done bucked up to the wrong nigga just cause u claim to be heavy
i'll put more cylinders in ya ass then a 2 door chevy
^^^^pretty nice intro, 6/10
i got slugz that i let off i call them "holding-hell"
once them shits pierce ya body i know i'm folding "golden-shellz"
^^^^mmmm, not bad, flow was a bit of though, 5/10
u a ho in this rap shit so i'm "pimping-u-faggot"
if a dick flew past u why u was prewriting you'd probably "quit-to-grab-it"
^^^nice closer, 7/10
pretty nice verse here, punches kind of weak and flow was a bit off but good verse. total, 18/30
so ur new to rapverse, so consider ur career ended i could give u a win but but, just consider this as one that I ended.
^^^^^rhyming ended with ended!! dont like it, 3/10
me wanting to bust ur ass is a good enuff reason
u like the KNICKS so ull win wen they have a 20-0 season.
^^^^na, dont like it either, flow was crooked aswell, 4/10
wanna make it to the playoffs, not this year
oh shit BRAVO get the fab 5 i found another Queer
^^ha, nice closer, 8/10
first to bars i didnt like but the last bar was nice,
total, 15,
vote goes to liviv legend, good battle here,
please return the favour and drop a vote on one of the battles below
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CrhymeSindicate
'Till Death
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Originally Posted by Nostradamus
Your really dope though.. 
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