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bringin' new thoughts to the name disability-flossed in tight wear shiny shoes you feelin' me
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IP:
yo im really feelin the story line, most of the structure was good, not that much flo, and i aint much with rhymin same words, like me and me, but i like the story, maybe you could put more into her feelings seein wat was happenin.
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Battle's
openmic
WINS
killuminatic K.O.
Big Woody K.O.
Da Solution 5-1
Big Woody 5-2
LOSSES
killuminatic K.O.
Da Jokah K.O.
Whiskey 5-2
dawgfatha_13 5-3
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