i wasnt goin to read it at first cause its small print, but i started and couldnt stop. you totally turned the tables man i fo sure thought that fool was gonna die but then comes suicide. its funny that you got this cause my cousin is lookinn at 6 years in the pen for this exact incident, caught his girl literally guy is in coma at the moment, so on so on. i like the story but you really need to work on rhymin different words, and try some multi's as long as it works with the story, but on the positive was tight.

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