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Old 10-25-04, 12:33 AM   #13
Spektikul
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Voted For: Rapper ROD

Yes, I believe this was a definate one-sided battle:

ROD: You came out with the stronger opener and had multies and harder punches than Poison. Try making your lines a bit longer, use better vocab, and try using a different structure maybe. But I can tell you right now...a lot better than your opponents nice work man, I can see you got talent, just gotta work at it, payce.

Poison: I thought this was one of the weakest verses I have ever read, not joking. You are an obvious noob to this site and need to elevate so much dawg. First of all, it doesnt count as a multie if your just rhyming the same word throughout the whole verse, try changing up the rhymes with other words. Next, You need better structuing and definatly better vocab...seriously, your most tech/longest word was "battling", thats weak. Finally, try actually throwing personals and punches in a battle man, other wise it just looks like a very weak freestyle...Your objective is to hurt your opponent with punches...in this case, you hurt yourself. But take what I told you into consideration for next time and GL to you. Payce.

Overall: It is easy to tell who I am giving my vote for here, and that is Rapper ROD, kids got heart, lol. Props to both tho, weak battle. Lates.