damn....

adamant
man i liked your poem man it was nice,your's i would say was more complex,and the vocab was sick with it,your structure was cool too even tho structure dont matter to much in a poem but yeah it was clean status,aswell was the imagery put into your poem,but i didnt feel alot of emotion in it..but there was a little

lyric
you my friend did very well in this too,your imagery,emotion...was all the way there in the poem and that was dope,you had good expression and details put into your piece which helps the reader visualize what happinning and shit you feel,,and your vocab was okay in this nothing bad really

-overall-
you both had pretty well writtin poems here in this battle,but i feel lyric took this with overall better imagery,emotion and self expression,adament you came clean with the vocab and the imagery andshit but it wasn't enough,as i sad in predictions i knew this would be a great battle...thank you both

v/lyric

__________________