Eh, this was a decent battle over all..

Frankly Devine Visionary came out stronger with his Punchs, and metaphors over all.... His rhyme scheme was ok coulda been better by making the bars a lil shorter but still a nice verse.. Id rate it like a 7/8 for one...

Dejure - Not bad of a verse.. Some of your lines had me laughing, They really werent that hard tho.. Your first set of bars were kinda funny, but kinda weak at the same time.. Over all like a 6/7 for a verse...

Metaphors= DV
Punchs= DV
Mulits= DV
Rhyme Scheme=DV
Vocab= DV

vote= Devine Visionary came out way better.. Had pretty much all tha aspects done were as Dejure didnt.. He lackd on to many things..

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