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Oh yea flywhiteguy i know you might have ment well but daum hommie i asked for feed back not insults look at what you wrote

First off u think ur life is hard, Depends how u look at it, dependz how u play ur card, im tellin u straight that ur thinkin like a retard,

Where im from you think what you were tought
an you learn from what you go through
So how do you think im going to think for the time being
until change comes in to my life,we all got hard times
im just stating some of the facts not all
So people are always going to have there own way of thinking
When i write i write for a sulution not to cause problems
I write to release stress an to clear my mind and it works
So thanks for the feed back but people are always going to have problems
no matter where you go or what you do thats just the way it is
But out of it all God still loves you,,but some of us even refuse to believe
Just because they cant see him or touch him,,but he's always been there for me
And im sure he's always been there for you and others
Dont get me wrong i wrote this to release my stress im feeling some times
But in hip hop you got to watch what you say to people
dog in the future dont post a flow just give me feed back

I would never tell some to think differently if i dont know what they been through
But i will offer the word of God ,because only he can help us think differently
And only he can bring change into any ones life even minds,,,
But thanks for the responce just give feed back instead of a flow
because you could have put that up for the whole site to see
now the only way they see it is through minds not a good thing
I want them to see your work so it can stand alone a shine like all of our work should
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Your words
Seriously, u need to start thinkin differently...

My words
Only God can change my way of thinking
And its not like im out to kill any one so theres not much to change
But only to share my creativity with the world through my pain