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Old 10-25-04, 01:26 PM   #7
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Heart vibrating against the cage that im trapped in…
Sweat evapourate from the pours on my slack skin…

^^Nice start..made impact from start. i could sum the whole...OM piece up wit this sentence...nice

Harmless consumption of alkalhol was normal…
Body above mind so these acts were immortal…

^^Word true also.




The truth is I remember, name, clothes and gender…
Off the young girl I hit that cold night in December…

Wow..lol bad bad bad bad drunk drivin is really bad......lol but i felt this.





not claustraphobic but these walls are closing…
20 years inprisonment is what this trials proposing


^^Imagery..nice




Yo i can go on and quote stuff i liked but overall man...this was sick neva though u be able to do topicals..but am impressed. i rate this around 9 area..........contend was already felt from the start work on emotions....cuz i felt at times and times i didnt....transitions were well placed imagery was there also....nice overall like i said homey.
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