Phlogiston
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Voted For: Bizzey
Emcee:Bizzey
Verse:
ILL Vocalists? You must be deep-throaterz with SCABIES-n-CRABS (get it?)
With RABIES-n-SCABS from LICKIN'-DICKS of "FAKE"-LADIES-IN-CABS/
Furious-A-FAG that CLICKS-n-DRAGS and SPITS-n-BRAGS bout DICKS-HE-GRABS
I'll RIP-n-GNASH these B*TCHES-GASHED (dag!) Your verse stinks like PITTS-&-ASS/
My FIST-IS-FAST when I HIT-n-BASH, so you're "History" like HITLER'S-PAST
I'll EQUIP-THIS-MASK and BLAST LYRIC-GAS till' you're dissolved into LIQUID-ASH/
I'll WHIP-n-LASH ya'll like us Blacks wuz when whites said,"YER-SHIP-IS-CRASHED!"
LISTEN-FAGS, My vocals are clear-n-SHARP so when I TAWK; Im SPITTIN'-GLASS
Thats SLITTIN' ya' neck till' you SPIT-n-GASP; STRIP-n-SLASH ya'll till I see blood DRIP-n-SPLASH/
I DISMISS WRITTEN-TRASH; when Furious, "Drops His", bizzey FLUSHes-HIS-"SH*T"-n-LAUGHS
No "Vocals" last when ya' RIPPED-TWICE by THICK-SPIKES that SLICE-WIND-PIPES/
I-THEN-WRITE your momz," They shoulda' watched our boy from SAFE-RANGES
I dug their graves, but they buried theirselves IN-IT the MINUTE they clicked **SAVE CHANGES**
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I'm DRILLIN BITCH FAGGETS with SPRITUAL GAGETS and I'm KILLIN THIS WACK KID for a LYRICAL HABBIT.
I let LOOSE HEAT at WHO SPEAKS of me" I'm trimin ya record I'll put a end to ur seven like the begining of a NEW WEEK,
I'll STORM VERBS TO END HERBS" i teach lessons so prick-learn if u step u'll get-"Burn" like ur FORMER CREW MEMBER,
I'll SPLATTER THIS GEEK cus ur CHATTER IS CHEAP"
Take the win and leave you "Pissed" off like ur BLADDER IS WEAK,
I SLICE NICE when I LAUNCH WITH HARD BLADES" and ur flow is like FIGHT NIGHT cus ur PUNCHES ARE PLAYED
Comments:
um i think that to took this because you literaly took this....in my opinion you shouldnt even be battlin cats like furious because your more elevated then he is...and make is shorter i was getting bored...lol
Marks:
Wordplay - 7/10
Metas - 7/10
Vocabulary - 7/10
Structure - 4/10
Punches - 6/10
Opener - 7/10
Closer – /5/10
Personals – 6/10
Enjoyment – 3/10
Creativity - 7/10
Overall - 59/100
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Emcee:Furious
Verse:
Who’s this kid tryna be, fuck it, I’ll come wit something racist
This bitch fronts in front of more niggas than in the slave ships
I’ll destroy ya, remove ya ugly face with my harness
So shit, he don’t spit, he vomits up garbage
This cat wack, so how did he end up on the top of my shitlist
Cuz I only handle the best…not the owners of the herb & newb business
& You’re the fittest? Either that or you’re RV’s wack diversion
Cuz you couldn’t be hard if you were on the latest PS2 T.H.U.G conversion
Is it tough kid, can’t handle it, can’t swallow the truth
Cuz fact is, your rhymes couldn’t look good, on a self-made photoshop booth
So you joined on the 15th of October, wanting to be dope, ill, & remembered
don’t worry, you’ll soon be legendary…as a hall of shame member
Comments:
ok um...well i can safely say you put in a fight i was gonna vote for you but then i read bizzeys long ass verse...which he should shorten btw and then i decided to vote for him...you dont need to really work on anything just elevate...
Marks:
Wordplay - 6/10
Metas - 6/10
Vocabulary - 6/10
Structure - 7/10
Punches - 5/10
Opener - 7/10
Closer – 5/10
Personals – 6/10
Enjoyment – 6/10
Creativity - 4/10
Overall - 58/100
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