Voted For: lil kid

Lil Kid's Still Refers to His Pre-school days at his cresh//
My rhymes upon Impact Tears and Ravages ya Flesh//
^^^^^^^^^^^^HMM KINDA PLAYED PUNCH GOOD FLOW GOOD STRUTURE BUT IT WAS PLAYED



Ya Deceased-Terminated Prematurely Like an Abortion//
Surprise Ambush Wit my 0-0 record didnt have time for a caution//
LINES A LIL TOOOOO STRETCH BUT IT WASNT AN GOOD PUNCH THOUGH


The way Ive Merked This dude he'll b trippin and Regurgitatin His Food//
This Battle was over before it begun It was jus easy to Conclude//
^^^^^^^^^^^ YA MESSING UP DA FLOW.LINES A LIL TO STRETCH NOW U HAD AN PUNCH ON THIS BUT IT WASNT HITTING

DEAD AIM-YA NEED TO WORK ON PUNCHES IT WASNT HITTING VERY WELL ENOUGH,USE MORE CREATIVE ONES,LINES WAS TOO BASIC













I Hurt-Foolz...so i'l have you "Covered Wit Shellz" likez "Turtlez"...
...I laugh when I See-You-Spit...have you "Stutterin" like your from "G-Unit"!...lol...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD PUNCH




Beat me? You On-Jointz?...have ya "Sit On Knivez" just so you "On-Point"!...
...This guyz soft like Furry-Kittenz...i'ma leave "Dead Aim" wit "Blurry-Vision!"...
...I'll Smack-Ya-Crew...i'm still young but i've never met anybody as Wack-As-You!...
...You got Lead-Mayne?...well i'ma "Break Ya Gunz" so ya really "Dead-Aim!"...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ I SAW NICE MULTI'Z GOOD FLOW GOOD PUNCHES

LIL KID-HAD MULTI'Z GOOD PUNCHES GOOD FLOW,,,,,NEEDS TO WORK ON STRUTURE AND VOCAB AND USING PERSONALS


OVERALL-LIL KID TAKE DIS HANDS DOWN HE HAD HARDER PUNCHES GOOD FLOW,BUT DA PUNCHES JUST WON DIS CATEGORY

DEAD AIM-YA NEED TO WORK ON YA PUNCHES A BIT PLAYED AND TOO BASIC,,,,ELEVATE USING CREATIVE PUNCHES ,,,KEEP DA LINES LENGHT UP,,,,,,,,PLUS USE PERSONALS "OK" WORK ON HARDER PUNCHES BASICALLY

~PEACE~

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