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Old 10-25-04, 06:25 PM   #24
BkBrawla
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Voted For: ~DESTINY~

yo- you wana battle me you must b on crack
my lyrical rorce will leave you wiv a snapped back
^^^^^^^^^^ ERM TOO BASIC MAYNE ELEVATE USING CREATIVE PUNCHES


leave you in a wheelchair with a destroyed spin
dont even bother spittin back this batle is mine
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ DIDNT RHYMED MINE&SPIN NOT AN GOOD FLOW PLUZ DA PUNCH DIDNT CONNECTED

you might have a crew - ive got an army barracks
bring your boyz ill leave em sliced up in black sacks

^^^^^^^^^^^^ ERM "OK" PUNCH NOT DAT GOOD BUT OK PUNCH

your lyricks are week - ill chew em up like wrigglys
ill leave you beheaded - you family distraught like ken bigleys
^^^^^^^^^^ LINES A LIL STRETCH MESSING UP DA FLOW AND DA CLOSA WAS "OK" NOT DAT GOOD BUT ITS COOL \






MURKAGE-HE CAME A LIL WEAK WIT DEM PUNCHES MADE AN "OK" PUNCHES VERY WASNT HARD HITTIN GOOD FLOW,,,,USE CREATIVE PUNCHES NEXT TIME AND PERSONALS










Hey mr.murk, Iwil btich slap that smrek off ya face,
I will tangle your style worse my avirex shoelace,
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ERM PUNCH HARDER


I will sleep on you, diss on you take a huge shit onyou,
And whenyou say IAMTHEKING. I will say I AM TOO
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ERM WACK DONT LIKE DA PUNCH AND TOO BASIC


I will help you a littlebit, Start off with the wordshit,
Cuz thats all you madeof, andwhen you blow you dontspitt,
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ DIDNT MAKE SENSE AND PLUS WASNT AN GOOD PUNCH GOOD FLOW BUT DA PUNCHES IS LACKING



I busted you for stealing tampons andsuch at KMart,
Well in rap, I am way higher on the "Flow" Chart.

^^^^^^^^^^^^ "oK" GOOD CLOSA





DESTINY-YA VERSE WAS KINDA WACK NOT AN GOOD PUNCHES WERE HITTIN IT AND PLUS IT DIDNT MAKE SENSE NOR CONNECTED BUT GOOD FLOW THOUGH

OVERALL= I HAVE TO GO WITH DESTINY WITH THIS ONE SHE CAME WITH A LIL HARDER FLOW AND GOOD STRUTURE UM WORK ON PUNCHES DESTINY DIDNT REALLY CONNECTED IN DIS PART BUT U NEED TO WORK ON THAT


MURKAGE-U HAD AN "OK" VERSE BUT DA FLOW YOU JUST LOST POINTS ON THAT

BOTH OF U HAD LACK OF PUNCHES,,,,,ERM PLAYED OUT

SO I HAD TO GO WITH FLOW AND

DESTINY WON THAT ROUND

~PEACE~
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