This track coulda been so much better......first off R-rated what are u doing man?.....your flow lacks smooveness...instead of flowing to the beat..you force ya flow on the beat...shit sounded wack.....u completely ignored the snares...your lines were coming up short an u were constantly pausing in a untimely manner...u sped up on some lines to make it fit instead of writing it to flow...your flow killed any chance of ya verse being impressive...u got alot of elevating to do.....deadly...ya verse was somewhat better....your production hurt u alot....your vocals were way to loud....an your dubs were WAY TOO LOUD...an the highlighted words like the certain words u yelled didn't seem to be approiate for this beat to me.....your flow was decent but u were stumbling on some words...this woulda been alot tighter with a chorus as well so I'll give this a.....5/10 cuz both of you coulda done much better.

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