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Old 10-25-04, 07:36 PM   #36
ghetto cripple
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Voted For: RED BEAM

beam: short and sweet, had mostly good hitters, a lil bit creative, some simple rhyme "simple" and "pimple", then more complex rhymes also "whirl" and "curl" not that complex but not wat a newb would use.
favorite bar:
"You prolly think like a diplomat, you love rockin pink
I guess i'll take out this old garbage, cause i learned you stink"
fav line:"when i beat you 5-0...i know you'll be loosin it"

lyrics: had some good hits also, he had more cause he wrote more so thats a pluse, didnt hit very hard at all, he was dissin but nothin had a core plot, each line was different, not much really went together except first bar and this one
"thinkin you "got connects on RV"
sorry cuzz i think you mean "burgers at arbys"
and that line was not even a hit, and if you use somethin with "rocky" it has to be phenominal or else its just stupid because its been played out to much and you didnt use it phenominally, that whole bar was just off nothin hittin at all, really look at this line and tell me wat is hard about it(and its not the rocky part either)
"ill serve you like employes servin coffe
get to cocky
and ill throw "punches" that will knock you out like "rocky"
i'll serve you like employees servin coffee, nope to soft to get my vote.
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