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Old 10-25-04, 07:58 PM   #10
Paris Hilton666
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Voted For: Ikynovel

Conclusion- I see potential in you kid but it wasnt that good it had a good point a view and I followed the story line good but still wasnt good enuff. your wordplay was okay and ya rhymin skills were good too. As I said before you got potential.

novel: ok that was good for 30
minutes yours was better cuz I said so lol j/k, your verse was good in all of the catergory. I like how you ended it up screamin it made the closing of the verse that much better.

so in conclusion my vot goes to Novel
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