Voted For: Ikynovel

Conclusion: Imergery was decent, very good vocab, good imagination. I liked some of the words you rhymed with also.

Flaws: Some of the lines were very stretched, but you added commas so it made it a little easier reading.

Favorite Lines: I was Left Alone, With My Self Destructing Conscience which was Uttering Soft Idea's....
I was a missing link & a Gape in a Community & Family who were known For Enduring Toughest Career's....

The Odour Of Bleach & Cleaning Fluid's Hung in the air & burnt my Sense Of Smell...
Two Collosal Men approached Me..Analysed me and Popped 4 Pill's In my mouth I failed to Repel...

Novel: Your imegery was good also, you created a scene pretty wall also. You also had some good vocab and some good imagination.

Flaws: I wasnt feeling the centered effect but other than that it was tight.

Favorite lines:never alone, constantly watched anger never dissapating..
patiently waiting, staff gazing, always anticipating...
fearing i'll try and hurt myself, suicide being the worst thing
and i admitted myself, look at the craziness this world brings
heart stops thinkin, 3 dasy left, and my world is DETOX
meth amphetamine coerced me, slowly see my mind lock
thinkin of past times..i sit and write rhymes to ease the time
give up on pipe dreams, for they will never free my mind

Overall I gotta go with novel

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