this was ok seemed like u forced some things...
.but was ok..you could use some work on your vocab
decent drop..but could have been alittle better man
no hate just my opinion, and tryin to lay the facts..

but keep up the work and u will be right on key soon enuff.

thing that stood out most for you was this;

"I look in my past to mention, not to make such a rash decision
to clash wit persission, is only to amask the opossition"
allright job man..once again no hate just feedback...Pz.