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I just don't give a fuck!
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Voted For: Auspicious
Imma have to give this to Aus...
ajax: Ok you had some pretty decent shit but nothing really stood out to me... Like the evolve line that could of bin worded betta to make a betta punch/personal. But it just didn't have the same effect.
Before I started writing he was wishing me luck…
Look how quick he is to just give himself up…
^where was the punch in that^ that was just an example.
I liked ya opener but that was it.
Aus: I really liked this verse. Original lines in there too. Tha opener was funny as fuck. Nice personal and wordplay on his name. All ya bars were original i think. Realy nice use of metas in here too.
Your screwed, you dont know what kinda trouble your soakin in..
Cuz' i'd tell him elevation is key, but he lost the door to open it..
Nice Punch.
Nice use of metas also.
I give this to Aus for a better overall verse. Punches were original and humerous.
Vote: Auspicious
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