Wow, Ice, this was one of the best poems i ever read, some peeps should actually read the whole verse before they say something... wow, my minds still full of amazement literally, cuz of this poem, I say valor ain't the best poet anymore lol, i like the begginging, first you try to think what the hell is in that box, and you still don't tell, then towards the middle of the poem, you talk about cutting someone in the neck.. then it just starts to make a little sence, but still blury of what your trying to say, then towards the end, it all made sence when the doctor said, you have no heart, they opened your chest and there was a "BOX," now that freaked me out im like..damn dats crazy...very good verse man, i mean it..very very good.. very dope actually..wait very ill..hot..well excellent..there you go lol.. im lookin forward to more of ur poems man... 9/10

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