I merely said that I would have preferred if there was rhyming, structure, and flow. I still liked it, but that was my feedback about what I would have liked better. I am here to post my opinion; if you do not like it, then ignore it. I prefer structured poems. You may like the free verse better, but do not insult me just because I have a low post count. The rest of you just went along with what the high post count member said. What a bunch of sheep.

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rap4 ( P ) Pronunciation Key (rp)
n. Slang: A form of popular <a href="http://www.ntsearch.com/search.php?q=music&v=56">music</a> developed especially in African-American urban communities and characterized by spoken or chanted rhyming lyrics with a syncopated, repetitive rhythmic accompaniment.
^Don't forget the white man^
Poetic Scriptures poems:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157364
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157462