Good flow. Too short, though. You contradicted yourself when you said you were rude, then on the next line that you were sweet and very nice. Not too deep. Self glorification is not really my thing. Two lines brock off from the length of the other lines. Decent. Keep writing and elevating.

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rap4 ( P ) Pronunciation Key (rp)
n. Slang: A form of popular <a href="http://www.ntsearch.com/search.php?q=music&v=56">music</a> developed especially in African-American urban communities and characterized by spoken or chanted rhyming lyrics with a syncopated, repetitive rhythmic accompaniment.
^Don't forget the white man^
Poetic Scriptures poems:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157364
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157462