Voted For: PayDay

aight..
payday, dont space ya bars out like that, makes em seem like they dont connect in places, an dosent flow as well...

but....
Punishment is painful when you know you deserve it// 1
It's like a hustla on a clucka ~ let me show you how I serve it
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thats a real nice opener, ill wordplay..

You Already Know I defeat the room// 3
Then I be all over your girlfriend like some Cheap Perfume
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defeat the room line was a lil self glorfyin but the cheap perfume line was pretty humouress...

Kwell I pull more strings than 10 guitars// 5
and I will leave u dumped in the dumpster wit More than just Scars//
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wasnt feelin it, seemed a lil forced...

I’ll Stab n’ Lynch you with a Pad n’ Pencil// 7
A Lyrical god ~ I got mad skillz but you don’t even Have Potential//
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not bad, decent wordplay, but a lil self glorying an again seemed somewhat forced...

PayDay is a Rappin Monsta ~ like the sopranos I’m a mobsta// 9
I Have you eatin shells n’ I aint talking bout Crabs n’ Lobstas//
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wasnt feelin ya closer..
lacked creativity....

kwell.........

t damn sure aint hard ta' tell this is one of RV's shadiest geeks
n wit these lyrical shots,
..............i've got the kinda arms that'll rock this baby ta' sleep
u crazy ta' see a win in your future, son........foo it's impossible
ya too stupid...u wouldn't have IQ if i played pool wit ya opticals
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the optical line was the only thing i was feelin in those bars

i'm eludin this obstacle...u've been slow since the damn beginnin
yo, like mute people at sports events...u've got no chants of winnin
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prettyy decent vocab, nice punch in there too, an nice wordplay..

i already demoralized u dawg...now u better off steppin in stealth
u the laughing stock of RV, n it's bout time that u invest in yourself
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decent shit, nice wordplay an punch, hard hittin personal too..

i didnt wanna stoop to this dude's level, cuz thats a loss of respect
but next time PayDay comes thru, i already know i've got him in check...
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noit the strongest closer, but it seemed more creative than paydays closer...

on the whole, kwells verse was more creative an had the hard hittin punches, an payday seemed to self glorify in his verse, so my vote goes too kwell
no hate to neither of ya...
can i get a returned vote in my sig?

thanx
peace

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