Voted For: D Fury

U a bitch brah I saw you grippin the sleeves of a Villain...
Waitin for my final answer like you was Regis Philbin...
nice line hard punch good job

Easy killin,some take it outside I take it to the hearse...
My muscles had explosions of faith like a grenade in a church...
also another good line.

I'm waiting to burst like pregnant chicks in hospitals...
If you see victory you better fix ya opticals...
flow was off and didnt make sense

Your spits Offensive! And i whore authority,fuck ur seniority...
Your the warrior head of gay poetry sorry homme aint with that sorority...
wasnt a very good line. he offended you thats a good thing for him not you.

Often I spit to diss-grace a kids plans...
Ur not true,ur soft and faker than sailine implants...
sucked but i had a idea of a punch.

U got the dispatch on speed dial,calling all the time...
Like a quarterless bitch at a coin-op alwayz droppin dimes...
simple rhyme but good punch.

Theres no debate,I'll take wins without bowin down...
Even when using ya big boy voice u still sound like bow wow...
good punch but needs work.

So let me try to make things more clearer...
The only way I lose is if I battle myself in the mirror...
stupid closing. you proved that you could lose a battle. never ever say that.
score 7/10
feed back. use bigger words and stronger punches.


Does the D in D Fury stand for done for?
Ya Finished, don't even try to spit anymore
punch sucked. nice try

I gave ya three days, times low on the clock
You'll be done at deadline, I'll call you hick dick and dock
what a pathetic line no hate needs improvement.

Ya only Fury is in gay porn when you get hurried
You and Lloyd Banks in that video, cept his face was blurry
llyod aint gay and its a battle against him not lloyd stay on topic.

I'm hott coming back here, Burnin with re-entry heat
Cut me at the ankles, you still couldn't deal D-feet
Because I'm sure every one knows that I got D beat
good rhymes but not really a hard punch.

You couldn't make waves if you was sinkin cruise boats
Call you Varitek after you catch my blade in your throat
nice punch. good job.

Your punches don't connect liek operators fallin asleep
Ya musta lost ya marbles cause I'm playin for keeps
dont kno what that was.

Get prescriptions for Zertec cause i got D-pressed
I'm not a newbie, as you've probobly guessed
leave shit like that out.

Like battlin calenders, boy ya days is numbered
Spittin lyrical thunder, put you in lyrical slumber
there you go with vocab and wordplay.

You won't win this battle, its beyond your control
You'll have to get bitten more than Snow Patrols
nice closing. score 5/10
feed back
get elevaated on punches.
vote=D-Fury
return with honest votes.

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