ok~thanks for the link,
kontro~good beat, was feelin your mic presence, nice flow and lyrics as well, you should try to be more clear with your words, you sound a little muffled,but not bad,nice strong voice as well..
9th~your lyrics were great,,lol,some good lines too, love the beat as well, i heard it before somewhere, your flow is good, still a little shaky, but you did well, the only thing i would say would be to try to unleash your emotion more, you sounded a little bit monotone here, but not bad, this is just constructive feedback for you both...because i'd want some honesty too, but you both did well, a few more,you guys will be dope....
this was tough to judge because you were both strong in areas and lacked in areas,but i'm going to go with kontroversey, due to strong mic presence and good delivery with his flow....great job both......1

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