ayo this cripple here, that was hot, you be mad flowin' lets see that skill there put in some of ya battles, i wanna see what you bring to ya next battle,
"Shoot guns, parallel
Pistal bust well"
that line was tight for real, i get a pic of two chest tubes hand in hand just spittin' lead, i like that alot.

"You never been to jail, I'm jail seen
Niggas seen, me in jail since thirteen"
sick flow and a very nice word play with the whole thing, you be rhymin "jail" and "*een" all at the same time, now thats how you rhyme same words "jail", i aint like your battle with rhymin "me" but this worked out very good.

"Player hater - ur team upon the regulator
Set you up, you wont make it to the elevator"
again this sets up really good imagery, im picturein this shit, and you put it together great so that the last line gives you the whole picture. first we understand there are some haters and that theres beef there and then "regulator" someone goin to die then with the elevator line, most would have said something about killin on the streets but you came with an elevator line, nice, reminds me of a line by fabulous he says, real short but is awsome it goes "i ride up on em' like escalators".
i like this also "Clique together, keep gats under the leather" another image line,
overall very good, kind of suprised how your battle verse was after readin this,
dont be lettin up on no one, go for the kill, grab those motherfuckers by the throat and rip they esophogus, wind pipes and tongue all out at the same damn time then spite salt on they wounds. lol. good luck with everything, and if you get enough posts vote on my battles, if they not closed, also check out my open mics, links on my signature.again good luck.

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