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Match Reviews - Week 5
Triple N vs. God
What kind of bullshit is a no-show Heavyweight Championship Match...cmon God you can do better than that...
Winner - Triple N
Winner - Efusive
Mike Hawk vs. Sdizzle
Kinda weak battle here from both sides. A lot of Mike Hawk's punches were meh...the ending was quotable but not fantastic...Mike needs to work on wordplay and creativity to come up with harder punches...the fat concept was there but it was never really effectively done. Nothing really jumps out at me about this verse. Pretty much the same for sdizzle...you had a few that were nice but otherwise meh meh meh...try being more creative and flipping concepts rather than just coming out and saying what you want to say...I really felt this was kind of a tie more than the votes reflected...
Winner - Sdizzle
Winner - Lyric
Winner - 9th Degree
Stephen Elwood vs. Socrates
Pretty much a one-sided battle in my eyes...should have been a K.O...Elwood was at Soc's throat here...a few forced rhymes here and there and could have gone for blood a little bit more with more ruthless punches but overall a very nice verse...Soc you got lazy in this battle...you expected him to come wack and you didnt write to your potential...first bar is terrible rhyming...after that you pick it up a notch but the last few bars are like pfffft...Im not gonna say what you need to work on because you know what you are doing...you just dropped too wack and got caught sleepin...
Winner - Stephen Elwood
Winner - Archeologist...cause He's just that Ill...
Winner - TitoBronsky
Notorious Verses vs. Paramik
even more fuckin no-showing...I didnt realize how much no-showing there was this week...oh well theyre all banned now...
Winner - Notorious Verses
frein-ma$ter vs. Iknoevel
frein-ma$ter...first off let me start by saying I totally hate that structure so my review might be harsher because of that...you really need to get into a two-line bar format and stick with it because i dont think you realize how stretched and irregular your rhyme scheme is...that being said your punches arent terrible...I've definitely seen worse...but you are forcing a lot of multis which comes out bad news...work on ill punches and then slowly integrate ill multis into your approach...not vice-versa...also work on getting personal because you could have changed the word Ikno and spit that verse against me or anybody else...diss on his sig or his profile or whatever you have to so people know this verse was custom made for him and not just out the back of your rhyme book...Iknoevel...total merkage...very nice punchlines in there...honestly i read to the fourth line and I already knew you had won...you got some meaningless multis in there which I will touch on when you get in a closer battle but it didnt really matter here this was a landslide...
Winner - Iknoevel
Winner - Idyllic Queen...for having an ass that just doesnt quit...
Kaotic.Theory .vs. Flow Intelligent
Nice battle here...it was pretty much one-sided in Flow's favor though...Flow you was just killin him with those punches...very nice shit man...I dont really have anything to critique...Kaotic yours seemed a little rushed...almost like you keyed it up...you need to work on getting more personal...on the wordplay...all that kinda stuff...did you get caught sleepin here or you thought he wasnt gonna show or what?
Winner - Flow Intelligent
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