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Damn... You ripped the shit in the verses... Loved that Cleo Line... Chorus was kinda off, but chorus's are the hardest thing in my opinion... Also, make your verses longer, your verse and your chorus are almost the same length... I'd give it a 6.5 outta ten with the chorus, and an 8/10 without it... Good shit.. Work on hooks...
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