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Old 10-26-04, 09:39 PM   #38
~Lady Fiya~
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Voted For: *KiRô-æ-PhY§iX*

yo
this kids whole career is just a ''boy-whoring-new b's''
my bars will leave this *woody more buzzed* than ''toy-story-movies''...1
your a herb, this kid is whack so ill ''SPEAR-n-smear-ya''
my bars leave him hung like handicapped signs on ''rear-view-mirrors''....2
like hes scared of bombs he's wishin he aint ''c-4'' [see four]
but check under his avy hes wishin he can ''b-more''...3
shake-spears lines are stretched and his ''bars-poor''
it obvious the *force is with u* like ''star-wars''....4[ya shits forced]......

^true personals- compared to the other persons verse.. shakespeare, not bad but a lot of ur lines were stretched.. kiro had better wordplay and creativity... nice battle shake spear work on ya quality and structure, and u str8... aight good luck with this, pz.. and peep my open micz..
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