K... so u want sum feedback huh... i aint flowin now... im talkin... well, typin...
i thought dat ur flo woz gud, needz a few more rhymez but yea, it woz gud, gettin ur point across about how u feel well...

Keep em cummin.....
.........safe.

PS.. not all flowz 'Shine'... Tha woz jus sumthin i typed back @ u cos i was bored... tried 2 get ma point bout ur flo back @ u thru another flo... anywayyz l8rzz....

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Sum PPL say tha MCin Aint For Da White Race...
...Why This Sayin This When They Kno Its A Disgrase..
N Yeah Them PPL need a can of mase anna few hundred bullets released in a spray all ova der face /Just 2 Stick dem in der place /But really they aint racist,they just hatin on me coz dey cant match ma pace..
Seriously, if u really dont think MCin is for tha white ppl I aint gonna change ure oppinnionz so ay, I got one thing 2 say, An thats that ure umm GAY!