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Voted For: Triple_N
wow~good topical you guys, damn this was close, because they are two different styles....but here goes..
Triple~this was beautifully written, and it flowed very well, great vocabulary and lyrical content, this took a turn as well,nice twist at the end,i wasnt expecting that, dope overall...
Ill Grammatix~your verse was very imaginative, good story line and vocabulary, loved the way you set it up and followed through smooth with the content,i feel you both in these verses, and you both have your own style and skill, but my vote goes to triple, due too, lyrical content and rhyme scheme, and the dope,surprise ending.......great job both...1
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