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Old 07-23-02, 08:01 AM   #8
MC4Eyez
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I liked this spit for the most part. It seemed kind of like a freestyle diss. I don't know why I say that, but something about how the lines fed into one another gave me that impression. The primate lines were tight. Overall, a good piece, but not a great one. For a diss piece to really stand out to me, it's got to have amazing wordplay.

Good work.

Peace
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