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IP:
I liked this spit for the most part. It seemed kind of like a freestyle diss. I don't know why I say that, but something about how the lines fed into one another gave me that impression. The primate lines were tight. Overall, a good piece, but not a great one. For a diss piece to really stand out to me, it's got to have amazing wordplay.
Good work.
Peace
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