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Old 10-27-04, 02:36 PM   #5
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Beat is coo....intro is ok...quality is ok as well....vocals are a bit loud hurts a bit...=/...rhymes are nice...but your lines are coming so fast it's hard to catch your punches...and the P's & B's are all over the mic making a sound...filter it...flow is on and off pretty much the whole time..emotion is good and delivery isnt bad...it just sounds cluttered a bit cuz your going a bit fast...nothing much else to say...decent track...

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