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Old 10-27-04, 04:43 PM   #2
Dirty Nigga
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Voted For: ghetto cripple

aight cripple got this again...............

U cant stand so goin toe to toe is perplexin to me
Cant stand for ovations so u stay on the edge of ya seat
^^^
ya opener didnt rhyme dogg, an i failed to see the point of the bar to be honest, that was your weakest thing in the battle

ya strongest was.....

well, to be honest, u just didnt have one...
ya shit was too basic, that deene barnes line was a horrible attempt of a punch............

cripple, ya flow was too basic in places too...
ya came harder with your punches

for example...

killum under estimates this cripple and my diss-ability/
swap the chair for a tank, and leave you with a disability/
^^^
that was pretty creative, wasnt the hardest of punches, but it was far better than anythin ya oppenent had toi offer....

on the whole, cripples verse was much more entertaining to read, the punches n disses were harder, an the flow was more creative an not AS basic....

return the fave in my sig both a yall
an no hate to kill, u just need to up ya game n be more creative, holla with a returned vote tho

peace yall n good lookin...
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