i could only skim through this piece...as it was long - but more importantly, done in CAPS LOCK...and my eyes are fuked up at the moment...so from what i read...

was raw...a bit of a hard hitting reality piece...good 'flow'...a bit cynical...(which is good in my eyes, as long as it doesnt go over the top, ALL THE TIME)...overall...liked it...

..but lose he caps 'please'...so we can all read it easier and what not...respect...