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Old 10-27-04, 07:52 PM   #9
Parallel
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dflow:
i dont know what that was..your stucture was seriously fucked up..punches were weak no vocab it was a alaround as kickin you got sry but man you have no punches and no wordplay nothing to hot hear...i gotta give this one to GGS he was hot...2/10

GangsStarShit:
dawg not bad...your stucture was a little off but it flowed...nice vocab nice witty metas..nice punches they were hot as fuck...could of been better but i dont think you tryed lol...nice punches enough said...try fixing your stucture make it even it will flow alot better therw out the whole verse..iight..7/10

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