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Old 10-27-04, 08:26 PM   #11
Parallel
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meh yours wasent that bad alright punches nice stucture and flowed a few multis no wordplay but not many people understand it atleast i know it...you had some pretty key punches that came hard..not bad vocabulary i think you took the division...7/10 coulda been better try workin on punches a lil more nothing suppa dope here..

Spektikul:
not bad not bad...nice punches some pretty key punches that came hard man you got the punches down and stucture...and it also flowed good job your elevating pretty fast keep it up...vocabulary didnt coem to hot you lost in that...but you had some pretty good witty metaphores in there that were dope...8.1/10

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