mess with me get cooked
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Voted For: ~*Legend*~
I'll terroize this bitch, match my skill? nah ya not ready
But fuck i dont mess with kids . . DO I LOOK LIKE R KELLY?
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ERM NOT AN GOOD OPENER NOR AN GOOD PUNCH
If you want me slaughter this herb just be patient
& Judging by ya lines.. We know why your a FREE AGENT
^^^^^^^^^^^^ "OK" AN PERSONAL AND AN PUNCH THAT COOL
I'm merked your dick mate drastic... right before you ..
& i aint gonna explain how wack you are...
.................When that verse did it for you..
Ok it's played, But your wack & that's legends curse
And this battle is 1 sidded...
like this part of my verse!
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ SOME PARTS IT DIDNT FLOW
DA PUNCH WASNT HARD HITTING EITHER AND YA MESSING UP DA FLOW WITH THAT STRUTURE "OK" ELEVATE ON THAT
spit the sickest flow.. run smooth like vapours!
But ya VERSE has shitter DROPS.. than the stuff on my toilet paper!
^^^^^^^^^^^^ UM GOOD CLOSA NICE PUNCH
CHOAS-U HAD AN "OK" VERSE YA PUNCHES IT WHAT LACKED AND DA FLOW,U NEED TO FIX THA STRUTURE AND USING HARDER PUNCHES,AT SOME PARTS U DIDNT RHYME GOOD
I'm merked your dick mate drastic... right before you ..
& i aint gonna explain how wack you are...
.................When that verse did it for you..
Ok it's played, But your wack & that's legends curse
And this battle is 1 sidded...
like this part of my verse!
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AFTA DA YOU& PART U JUST STOP RHYMING ARE&YOU THAT DONT RHYMES
CURSE AND VESE YES RHYMES
BUT WHERE SIDDED RHYMES WITH SO THATS WHY IT DIDNT FLOW GOOD
When you rhyme you choke until you asphyxiate
Don’t back out now mother fucker its really too late
^^^^^^^^^^EHHHHH NOT AN GOOD PUNCH FLOW GOOD
You turn into a puss and then a dirty greasy sweat bag
Fuck off poser you remind me of that pathetic fuck B-Rad
Your punches are weak ass hole mines are like a left jab
Well now I leave you dazed and refused by these god damn crewz
I continue getting blazed and break thru sorry to break the newz
But you just a phase and bitch now from this spot you are excused.
^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT U HAD FLOW AND YA PUNCHES WERE A LIL BIT HARDER JUST EDGE IT A LIL
LEGEND-OK MAYNE U HAD AN GOOD VERSE NICE PUNCHES GOOD FLOW
OVERALL-THIS WAS AN CLOSE BATTLE CAUSE BOTH OF U NEED TO WORK ON PUNCHES WHICH NONE OF U HAD A DECENT PUNCH I MEAN
CHOAS HAD PERSONALS BUT DA PUNCH W/IT DIDTN HIT HARD
BUT ANYWAY IT CAME DOWN TO FLOW AND WHICH BY HANDS DOWN LEGEND GOT DIS HE HAD GOOD FLOW AND GOOD LENGTH OF DA SENTENCE (LINES)
SO I VOTE FOR LEGEND
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THE SLEEP & THE DREAM-
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Originally Posted by Wreckage
Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.
Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.
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SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!
P.S.A
COMING SOON- GODS BETRAYL
OUT NOW -THE SLEEP & THE DREAM
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