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Old 10-28-04, 03:13 AM   #12
Shadows edge
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Voted For: Socrates

Im tired of this fuck up, god dammit its makin me mad
So pathetic he has to sig the only vote hes ever had
almost
Blah actually i only battled cuz i have nothing to do
your records 5-5, thats zero and its still more than you
word your shit better. this line also makes no sense the way its worded, the setup is terrible.
Peepin your verse and all i can say is fuck commas kid
Your shit is one run-on sentence of how whack you is
could have been decent, wording kinda killed it.
Im dunkin oreo, whether its in milk, soda or coffee
Didnt make sense cuz I think this poor fuck will try to rob me
wtf? no.
oreo thinks hes better? seriously something aint right
only chants he has is the ones boo'ing him off the mic
kinda played, but at least its wordplay. flipped decently, setup even worded decently
reck careers for biting newbs, what makes you different foo?
not that we dont like you, we just hate loathe and despise you
terrible filler, didn't even flow
Youve been roasted with your pathetic attempts to cook me
Youre the reason people no longer say "One Smart Cookie"
not bad nameplay

Vote: socrates.

you still need to get a lot better.
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