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Old 10-28-04, 03:15 AM   #13
Shadows edge
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wtf i hate this voting system. ill break this down again, because it got lost:

you left this site and came bak cuz i crushed your dream,
how can a man stiil be a pussy without a hysterectimine?
don't use words you don't understand. hysteractamy is removing some of the uterus. it means less pussy, not more pussy. your line makes no sense
you lost royaly in the battle when your alais named strobe,
couldnt even up your game if you used an X-box as a probe,
no
you and empire got somthin in common, hate threads man,
this aint even web beef you this is more internet spam,
blah, horrible filler with no flow
dont battle no more, nostradomas made you a freeposter,
bars coudnt even be hot if they were popped out a toaster,
horrible meta, no wordplay, two lines have no relevence to each other
this oreo is unedible, if you get a vote then you got a taste,
you caint come back this rap shit and get repsect like ma$e,
no
really a computer nerd that wants to make it as a rapper,
told me to kiss your black ass but your really a cracker,
i dont think he is
screaming yeah, cuz you got this shit bad mother fucka,
remind me again and youll feel the lyrical burn like usher,
played

well there you have it.

work on setups and punches having to do with each other, work on wordplay thats not so stupid, work on better metas.
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